dude honestly
this is not even hip hip or anything close at least ours was hip hop wtf is this ??? this sounds like some depressing soap opera where johnny finds out that catie aint going to make it out the comma this is garbage homie where the fuck did you find those instruments anyway and why would you use a retard on a hip hop beat this has not hip hop elemts at all im just being honest you have a wierd way of describing hip hop maybe they do that in your world but this is the real world use something catchy and smooth